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Tuesday, 8 December 2015

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Friday, 27 November 2015

Book review T4 week 7

Book review Term 4
You can either blog this doc or, make a video book review. Remember you need to blog a book review every Friday.

Date: 13/10/2015
Title of book
Geronimo stilton (The christmas toy factory)
Author of book:
Geronimo stilton
Fiction or nonfiction:
Fiction

What was the story about? (Don’t give away the ending!)
Who were the characters in the book?
Geronimo work hard every day since his grandfather said that he had to work hard or other ways he will come back to work as the newspaper publisher and geronimo would be the water cooler which geronimo doesn’t want to do.. His grandfather says “work and no play  makes a mouse Rich , Rich, RICH!”
His grandfather plays golf now which he was the one that made the company and handed to his grandson geronimo.





Geronimo stilton, Thea, Trap, Benjamin, william shortpaws, Mrs claus ( santa’s wife), Santa,

What was your favourite part in the book? Why was this your favourite part?
Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why? Why not?
My favourite part was when geronimo had a christmas parent and he invited lots of people but he wasn’t done doing the decorations and making the food, and he didn’t know what to do, the thing that he didn’t know was that lots of people were coming to help him. Ding- Dong the doorbell rang there was everyone there, They said that they came to help him. Because it was it was a kind think and helpful.  
Yes, because every body like geronimo stilton books.
Picture of the cover:

Friday, 20 November 2015

Book Review T4 week 6

Book review Term 4
You can either blog this doc or, make a video book review. Remember you need to blog a book review every Friday.
Date: 13/10/2015
Title of book:
The haunting of Lara Lawson
Author of book:
Christine Johnston
Fiction or nonfiction:
fiction

What was the story about? (Don’t give away the ending!)
Who were the characters in the book?
It’s like aunt Dora’s still alive when lara and her mother, carol Lawson move into the old villa in tungane that dora left them. They both fill her presence very strongly.


Dora, Lara, Mom,Tamaiti,
What was your favourite part in the book? Why was this your favourite part?
Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why? Why not?
when lara thought that her mom was talking to someone. because it was kind of creepy and a bit scarey.

Yes, I would recommend this book to my friends because they like scary book and it’s a really good story.

Friday, 6 November 2015

Instructional Writing

How to make Noodles

Equipments needed

2- Noodles
1- Bowl
1- Fork
Electric water boiler
Bowl sifter

Instructions

First Put cold water in the Electric water boiler, then turn the electric  on.
Open both of the noodles and you will find some ingredients put it aside.
Dip both of the noodles in the bowl.
Then Pour some of the water that you put in the boiler in the noodles bowl.
Wait for it for 5-7 minutes.
Then get rid of  all the water in the bowl using a bowl sifter.
Now Put all the ingredients in the noodles use a fork to mix it. Then enjoy eating.   

Thursday, 5 November 2015

Book Review Term 4 week 4

Book review Term 4
You can either blog this doc or, make a video book review. Remember you need to blog a book review every Friday.

Date: 5/1012015
Title of book:
The Doll In The Garden
Author of book:
Mary downing Hahn
Fiction or nonfiction:
fiction

What was the story about? (Don’t give away the ending!)
Who were the characters in the book?
Ashley and her mom and her cat moved to a new apartment when they found the nasty mean old lady miss cooper who didn't like cats. Ashley and Kristi went to the garden and found a doll with blonde hair, one eye shut and the other open. The next day ash took the doll.

Ashley, Miss cooper , Mom, kristi,louisa , Snowball,

What was your favourite part in the book? Why was this your favourite part?
Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why? Why not?
My favourite part was when kristi wanted revenge from Ashley because kristi knew that Ashley took the doll.
Yes, Because it’s really good story and a bit scarey I think most people would like to read this book.
Picture of the cover:

The Doll in the Garden (Paperback) ~ Mary Downing Hahn (Author) Cover Art

Friday, 23 October 2015

Book review Term 4
Date: 23/10/2015
Title of book:
Canterbury Quake
Author of book:
Desna Wallace
Fiction or nonfiction:
Nonfiction

What was the story about? (Don't give away the ending!)
Who were the characters in the book?
It's about the christchurch earthquake.

Maddy, Tessa, Aunty Beth, Jackson, Laura, Zoe mom and dad.

What was your favourite part in the book? Why was this your favourite part?
Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why? Why not?
When Maddy saw the buds (It's a sign that things are going to get better) And cried with her mom, because it was really sad and they had faith that things will get better.
Yes because it a really good story and it's easy to read.
Picture of the cover:



Wednesday, 16 September 2015

This is my explanation writing

How the rain cycle works

Rain cycle is how the rain rains and what make it rain.
Evaporation : the changing of the water into a gas is called evaporation
Condensation: the changing of water vapor into water is called droplets is called Condensation.
Precipitation: water falls from the sky in the form of rain, snow or hail, this  process is called precipitation.When the sunshines, the heat of the sun warms the water
turning it into visible gas, ( called water vapor.)
the changing of water into a gas is called evaporation.
because gas is lighter than liquids.

water vapor rises into the sky.
they further move up into the way from earth surface due to the tempter of gas.
in the sky the water vapor cools and changes back into tiny water droplets.
the change of water vapor into water droplets is called condensation.
it is the opposite of evaporation

clouds are made up of tiny water droplets
so when condensation is accors in the sky clouds form and grow.
the droplets bang together and form even bigger drops.
when the drops get heavy they fall because of gravity.

thefs  grow and banp into another on their journey from cloud to the ground

and every single rain drop that reaches the ground is made of one million of the tiny rain drops. Rain drops fall on the ground surfaces, when the sun can shine on them and then oceans and lakes collect water that has fallen. water evaporates into the sky again and the cycle continues.

Friday, 28 August 2015

This is my active reflection about Explanation writing.


I give myself a thumbs up. 


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What am i most pleased with?

I'm most pleased with that the fact that it with my first time writing explanation writing, and i did a pretty good .

Thursday, 27 August 2015

How sea turtles grow into adults.


The sea turtle is a threatened species that has been on Earth for 150 million years. It takes approximately 20 years for a turtle to grow to be a breeding adult. The female turtle lays approximately 50 - 200 eggs on the beach. After she lays the eggs the female covers the eggs up with sand and then she leaves them. About six weeks later the eggs will hatch while 20 % are left behind and never hatch.


Once the baby sea turtles hatch from the eggs there will be other species such as predators waiting to hunt them down  like crabs, birds,and pollution  . After they reach the sea approximately only 50% will survive the journey to the sea. Babies sea turtles are  the same size as our palm.


As soon as  the sea turtle reaches the sea they start looking  for hiding places like seaweed. There are many dangers in the sea for sea turtles such as waves, pollution, whales, sharks, dolphins and sea birds for when they come up for air. 50% of babies that do make it into the sea, die from these animals and objects.           


Lastly the female turtle start breeding at age 20  although they can live for 80 years.Once a female turtle is ready to lay her eggs she crawls on to the beach and digs a hole in the sand so that she can lay her eggs there. Finally the sea turtle life  cycle will start all over again.


What I need to work on more in my explanation writing are.


  1. Use more precise words.


  1. Write more detail in each paragraph.



This is my explanation writing of how sea turtles grow into adultes.

Wednesday, 19 August 2015

This is my active reflection about instructional writing.

I give myself a thumbs up  



                   


What new learning can i celebrate?

I'm really proud of how i wrote my after school
snacks because it was written clearly and simple.