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Monday, 29 June 2015



The day things started disappearing


“ I can’t believe it” everything is disappearing said Marry.
Marry is a teenager girl she is 15 years old with long blond straight hair and blue eyes, she’s always on her phone. Jack is her little brother he is 9 years old and he’s naughty, with black curly hair and grey eyes. It was in wonderland it’s a beautiful place out there. The sun came up, you could hear birds singing on the huge beautiful trees. The place was full of happiness.

It start’s like this, Marry and her little brother Jack where going for a walk with their parents. as they were walking through the beautiful huge pine apple trees  things  were starting to disappear  but no one  noticed that except Jack Marry’s  little brother he actually noticed that things were gone missing. he tried telling marry but she didn't believe him, she asked him to prove that things are gone missing. One day marry was outside seating on the playground chair she was on her phone play games as she walk of from the chair to the play ground for a minute when she came back she couldn't find her phone “see i told you but you didn't believe me” said Jack.


And then marry believed him, one thing disappears, then another thing has gone,  we gotta  to do something they both said to each other. They were looking for the person who did that, day by day looking for the person who was taking all the stuff. one day jack was outside playing with his friends hide and seek  and he saw something on the distance taking all the stuff left. Jack run home and  told Marry and they both were follow the person. they were walking through the bushes for a long time . they saw where he was taking the stuff and went back home. When the next day he came to take more stuff he got caught by the police and went to prison. when the police were asking him why he was taking all the stuff and  he said because he doesn't have anything to own so he just decide to take the stuff that he wants. Everything  was back to normal again, nothing was disappearing and they lived happily ever after.

                                      The end!!

This is my writing test work, Hope you enjoy

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  2. I like you Work

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  3. Good gob Nazrat I really like how you wrote about The day things started disappearing I really enjoyed your story so much.

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